Rough Cut 1 - Video and Feedback
What Works Well
Nice studio shots and combination between performance and narrative
The idea of the camera being the person in the narrative works
Some well positioned shots
Narrative is becoming clear!
Even Better If
Max was a little more dynamic when performing - re-shoot the performance shots - watch the reflection on Max's glasses and shadows
You finished the song!
Slow down the leaving the bedroom - it is all a bit too quick
Get the lip syncing together with the track
Clean up the jump cut of Ryan walking away
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