Thursday, 26 January 2017

Rough Cut 3






What went well

The ripping of the P45 slip is well cut

The time lapse looks good




Even Better if

The kicking of the cone shot is brightened

More cuts of the drum beat

Sync the music to max in some of the performance shots its a little off

Make the scenes with the female outside brighter

Wednesday, 11 January 2017

Rough Cut 2

Rough cut 2




What works well

Nice pacing of the girl leaving the house

 Nice filters on max in the studio


Even better if

Include time-lapse of sunset at beginning of video

Add drum beat at begging of music video

Display female character to help narrative

Cut up P45 ripping scene as it is too long